tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post3643783595779472155..comments2024-01-15T05:32:28.793-05:00Comments on Journey to the East: Revisions, Round 1David Groverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17200717518145919923noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-55767026204191993682008-10-27T10:48:00.000-04:002008-10-27T10:48:00.000-04:00JZK: Judicious Zombie KillerJZK: Judicious Zombie KillerDavid Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17200717518145919923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-10431865923963926432008-10-27T10:14:00.000-04:002008-10-27T10:14:00.000-04:00Whoa, Dave, this list of alternate names is so epi...Whoa, Dave, this list of alternate names is so epigramical it could be a read as a standalone. Though, you've got some good letters, too. All I can come up with for me is "Just Zany (enough for) Karaoke." Pretty lame.Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00932766584239103059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-41586322948230389502008-10-27T09:50:00.000-04:002008-10-27T09:50:00.000-04:00Ok, I read all your comments on Sarah's. You actu...Ok, I read all your comments on Sarah's. You actually made me cry. They were very sweet (not counting SkipBo). I love you. <BR/> <BR/>Um, I loved you before the comments, of course.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241823908423552828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-14606270571681484932008-10-26T18:28:00.000-04:002008-10-26T18:28:00.000-04:00The kids are playing "Hey there Delilah.)I got Fox...The kids are playing "Hey there Delilah.)<BR/><BR/>I got Foxfire. It's huge that I did that. Take it as a token of my familial affection (I've been reading Jane Austen.)Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241823908423552828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-69352228392266294632008-10-25T15:31:00.000-04:002008-10-25T15:31:00.000-04:00I don't feel like going to all the trouble to read...I don't feel like going to all the trouble to read the notes. So based on what I can see these are my comments:<BR/>1. I liked the part about the shuttle launch window but now you've taken it out.<BR/>2. I didn't even realize your title was SDG until you changed it.<BR/>3. If you're changing around your friend's names in the beginning I think it would be better if it was Ash, Brock and Pikachu.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00631449795666501495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-34725920072996260662008-10-25T10:32:00.000-04:002008-10-25T10:32:00.000-04:00I bet you guys are using Internet Explorer to view...I bet you guys are using Internet Explorer to view this, right? That's surely the problem right there. It's a mess of a program.<BR/><BR/>I'll try to fix the notes so that they work with Explorer also, but I don't know if I can do it.<BR/><BR/>In the meantime, you might looking at the post with Firefox (if you don't have Firefox, you can get it <A HREF="http://www.mozilla.com/firefox" REL="nofollow">here</A>.)David Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17200717518145919923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-47921450787032037512008-10-25T01:32:00.000-04:002008-10-25T01:32:00.000-04:00is something really supposed to pop up?is something really supposed to pop up?amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294008433586396732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4303081661018618258.post-12788117312125959272008-10-25T00:22:00.000-04:002008-10-25T00:22:00.000-04:00There's something I don't understand. Not about y...There's something I don't understand. Not about your essay. I liked that. I especially like the spacing of the SDGs. And the story was more elegant, but you still sound like you. I'm interested to see if you incorporate any of your other ideas. Ok, the thing I don't understand is how to refer to the source to see the notes. Um, not to sound stupid, but are you the source? Yikes. I hate this comment. Just email it to me!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241823908423552828noreply@blogger.com